Monday, January 21, 2013

Abhi Bhi.........Kuch Baaki Hai!!!

Abhi bhi kuch daar mujme baaki hai..

 Abhi bhi kuch zindagi mujme baaki hai...

 Abhi toh sirf roya hu, Roo kar hasna baaki hai...

 Abhi toh bas gira hu, Uthh kar sambhalna baaki hai...

 Abhi toh bas samja hu, suljana abhi bi baaki hai...

 Abhi toh bas dusro ko jana hai, khud ho janna baaki hai...

 Abhi bi mujme kuch zindagi baaki hai...

 Abhi bhi mujme kuch zindagi baaki hai...
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7 comments:

  1. BritaJanuary 21, 2013 at 9:20 PM

    Nice one... kaha se lata hai aisi shayri's tu... ;)

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2013 at 11:42 PM

    Good one but u still need some improvement and fine tuning... :-)

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  3. UnknownJanuary 23, 2013 at 12:03 AM

    Jitni bhi zindagi bachi hai....
    Mere dost....
    Jee le... ;p

    Keep writing... :)

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  4. Viraj KharaJanuary 24, 2013 at 12:37 AM

    Extended Version of the same..

    Abhi toh kaam kar raha hun,Kuch sikhna baki hai
    Abhi toh Chala hun, ruk ruk ke phir se chalna baki hai
    Abhi toh kisiko hasaya hai,koi mujhe hasaye baki hai
    Abhi toh Duniya ko samjaya hai, Khud ko samjana baki hai
    Abhi toh shayari likhi hai,is ke gherai mein dubna baki hai...

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  5. Dhaval Nalin DoshiJanuary 24, 2013 at 3:19 AM

    @ Manish Sejpal...Thanx

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  6. Dhaval Nalin DoshiJanuary 24, 2013 at 3:20 AM

    @ Viraj Khara...Nice extension thank you for such a nice comment

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